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"Class Song -- The Song"
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Class Song
1999 CD |
I wrote
Class Song when I was 17, inexperienced in every sense of the word,
with only 5 years of piano lessons and 14 original songs under my
belt.
But it would become
the first song written by a Trenton High senior and voted by classmates as their official class
song. More than that, other schools would pick up on it in the
coming years. Now, well after my graduation, more people than
I ever imagined still approach me to
tell me they adopted this song as
a personal expression of their high
school days. With no record deal, no Internet and
no radio airplay, a little idea that began as a school writing
assignment would somehow manage to sell just under 5,000 copies. |
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A Creative Course
In 1979, my
high school (Trenton High in Trenton, MI) had a music program consisting of choir, concert band,
jazz band and marching band. As an extra-curricular activity,
there were a few different musical productions each year.
Although I signed up for every one of those opportunities, I would
never make a strong connection with any of the music teachers.
Also, there was no songwriting class and there were no instructors
with any songwriting experience. It looked like there wouldn’t
be any formal way to work on my songwriting until college. But
then in my senior year, a new course
offering caught my eye: A class called Writing for Publication.
The teacher was listed as
Dennis Hamilton. Little
did I know then that Mr. Hamilton would turn out to be one of the
most influential teachers of all my school years. In most of my
high school writing classes, we did what most students do: complete
an assignment, get a grade. But this course promised something
more. It offered the chance to create short stories,
articles or poetry and then submit them for actual publication –
while still in high school. |

My Senior Picture |
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THS Teacher Dennis Hamilton
piloted a successful video production class in 1978 which would
quickly grow and become the
Trenton
Public School's Educational Television Studio (TPS TV). He
directed CARUSO's first five studio videos. |
Assignment:
Outside the Box
I had always liked
writing short stories and I'd tried a little poetry but what I really wanted to be was
a songwriter. So when I read that course description, I saw it
as an opportunity to use the course to work on my songwriting skills.
So I went to see Mr. Hamilton and even though this was not a music
course, songwriting was a form of writing, so he
agreed to help me.
While the other
students used the book Writer’s Market to decide the best
places to submit their work, I bought a copy of Songwriter’s Market.
Both books were intended to make it easier to find publications that
accept appropriate submissions from unknown writers. Due to
the high cost of copyright infringement lawsuits, the vast majority
of publications would return unsolicited writing without
even opening it. Our chances of getting a rejection letter
were high but these books gave us valuable information like
which publications to
call on,
what kinds of
materials to send, and style and submission guidelines.
One of our
assignments
was to create a writing specification, then write to meet that spec.
So I thought: What if I wrote a specification for a Class Song, then
wrote that song and submitted it to my graduating class? The
submission would be a live performance, its acceptance would be
determined by a majority vote from my class and if successful, the song would be published in the
school yearbook. This satisfied all of the assignment's requirements.
I took my idea to Mr. Hamilton and he was intrigued. He was
very supportive, he
approved the idea and little did I know, he would be instrumental in
getting the song across to the students. As soon as I'd gotten
what I asked for, I realized that my work was cut out for me. |
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Getting the Idea
Musically speaking, I
had at least three major
handicaps. 1) My songwriting experience was pretty limited -- I had
written a grand total of 14 original songs, to varying degrees of
success. 2) I was only in my 5th year of lessons on piano,
the instrument I'd be playing to sell my songs. 3) Unlike hit songs
which could be heard every hour on the radio or played over and over
on recordings, my classmates would hear my song exactly one time –
live – and they’d have to instantly like it, remember it and
identify with it enough to give it their vote immediately afterward.
The first thing I did
was to write the
title. Naming the song "Class Song," served two purposes.
People would immediately know what the song was about and it
presumptuously implied that "this is YOUR class song."
Although I had written my first two words, I had created no momentum for writing
the lyric, because the title wouldn't appear anywhere
in the song except at the top of the page. |
For inspiration,
I looked through my
older brothers’ past yearbooks to see what kinds of lyrics the
previous graduating classes had chosen. Some served the
purpose better than others, but none of them spoke directly to
a graduating class, much less to ours.
That made me realize
I had one advantage which hit songwriters didn't. I could
personalize my song to a degree that would create a sense of
ownership by my classmates. One way to do that would be to
include our school
colors (blue and gold) and our school team (Trojans) in the lyric.
Another way would be to throw in some popular school themes. I
made a list which included football (we had a winning team), school
dances, dating and Friday night. I also wanted to say
something about the last four years (high school) and the next four
(possibly college). |

Graduation Day |
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Starting Lines
I knew that my first
four lines had to grab the listener fast or my song wouldn’t
stand a chance. At 17, I felt what most teenagers felt -- that
a lot of the advice I was getting about my life didn't feel right
for me. I was determined to make my own choices and mistakes.
That seemed like good theme, so I wrote:
“For the best years
of our lives: the last four
We’ve made more
friends than anyone could ask for
It seems that we, in
all our newfound wisdom
Were too unwise to
see the things we were supposed to be” |
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Over
the first four lines, I opened with a musical theme that builds
slowly, creating new motifs rather than repeating itself. After the
8 long lines of the verse, only musical line is repeated – the first
one. The 9 lines of chorus don’t contain the song’s title and
although they repeat a bit more, they create even more new motifs.
All of this was pretty risky in terms of audience recall on a single
listening. At that early stage of my writing career I probably
wouldn’t have been able to re-imagine the melody once my brain had
committed to it, so I was stuck with it whether it was destined to
work or not. |
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One of the most obvious musical
hooks in the song is in the bridge:
“We’ll see each other when we can
but never come back here again”
…a theme which which continues under the
next few lines:
“Friday night, feelin’ tight
The football fame, the dating game
The senior prom, the notes from Mom
The blue and gold
The Trojan mold” |
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I should explain
that last line. In the entryway of
the main entrance to
our high school, there was a Trojan head which was built into the
floor with mosaic tiles. It was considered pretty sacred and
there was an urban legend that if you stepped on it, someone from
the senior class would make you get down on your knees and clean it
with a toothbrush. We called this the “Trojan mold.” I
always heard in those two words a second meaning -- implying that we
Trenton graduates were forged from the mold of greatness -- of the
Trojans. I wanted to use this double-entendre in the song,
even though it would come to haunt me a few years later. |
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Getting the
Vote
I played the song for
everyone I knew, trying to get a reaction. Everyone said the
same thing: It was very different from any song they’d heard before,
but it spoke in a personal way about school days and they could
really relate to it. After all my friends and family had
weighed in, it was finally time to make the big submission.
At Trenton High, class songs were
normally selected from a ballot. In this case, nobody had ever
heard my song before and there was no recording of it yet. So Mr.
Hamilton arranged for an assembly so the entire senior class could
hear my song live. This was no simple task because it required
every student to miss part of a class.
I remember being
extremely nervous. I sat at the piano on the stage as the
school auditorium slowly filled up. The loud voices of my
classmates all filling the room at the same time was very
intimidating. Finally, Mr. Hamilton asked for quiet and
introduced me. Between that introduction and my first note,
every cough, squeaky seat or cleared throat was pure torture.
Somehow I got through it. I performed the song with just piano
and vocal and waited for the results after the assembly. In
the end I had nothing to worry about. In a vote by over 500
students, all but a handful voted for my song.
The News-Herald
printed a story about me being the first senior at Trenton High to
write an original song voted by his classmates as their graduating
class song.
Arranging and Recording
My brothers and I didn’t waste any
time. We rushed to book studio time and recorded Class Song
with piano, drums, bass and vocals. For the refrain “We’ll see each
other when we can / never come back here again,” I dropped out most
of the instrumentation and supported the vocal with a unison
glockenspiel part, giving it a childhood sound. |
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Next, I bought a
book on arranging for strings. It showed the ranges of the
instruments and explained what was natural and awkward for a string
player to execute. On a typed copy of the song lyric,
I sketched some ideas about where
the string parts should be heard and how they would support
the song during the different sections. Using the sketch, I was
able to imagine the four string parts together in my head and
draft them by hand
into a score.
Then I had to transfer each of the four individual string parts onto
its own separate
page . Our recording engineer and good friend, Miller Goodman, (who
was also my piano teacher) hired the string quartet: Korky
Schneider, Adele Hamilton and Laura Paulini on
violin, and Peter Paolini on cello. We recorded the
strings in one session. At this point, most of the recording
was finished. |

Class Song
45 RPM Vinyl Single |
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Trenton High Senior Talent Show, 1979
Picture 1: Me (on keyboards)
Picture 2: Joe and Mike Caruso
Picture
3: Rob Caruso (drums) |
The four players were
seated closely on folding chairs in the small studio with the
handwritten scores on music stands in front of them. They
listened to the playback in their headphones and we recorded them in
just two takes while I listened and followed along on my own copy of
the score. It was the first time I got to hear the parts I
wrote.
For the final touch, I had my
brother Mike play a 6-note trumpet part over the outro: the theme
which is so closely identified with graduation ceremonies, “Pomp &
Circumstance.”
Since Class Song was our third
single, it wasn’t unusual for us to play it at every live
performance. As a result of all this exposure, without a record
deal, no Internet and no radio airplay, Class Song would go on to
sell just under 5,000 copies.
Senior Talent Show
By this time, my brothers and I were
playing concerts at Michigan high schools on a regular basis. When
we were granted a time slot in the
senior talent show in my graduating year, we included Class
Song in our set. In retrospect that worked out well, since my
commencement performance of the song would be marred by technical
difficulties. |
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Commencements
Our commencements
ceremony took place on our football field. As Class President,
I was supposed to give a speech. I decided to sing Class Song. Back at
the recording studio, we had prepared a backing track for me to sing
against. Unfortunately, when the time came for me to sing, the
P.A. system went out. I kept singing but it was obvious to
everyone that there was a problem. Somebody (possibly my
brother Mike) realized that the only good sound was coming from my
monitors – the small speakers on the ground which were only intended
to let me hear what I was singing. He
thought quickly and flipped those monitors toward the crowd in the
stands.
Unfortunately, the monitors weren’t meant for reaching an entire football field so
to make up for the loss of the main speakers, they were overdriven
to the point of distortion. To top it off, turning the
speakers away kept me from hearing myself or the track I was
singing against.
So much for the big moment, but I guess that’s showbiz. |

Singing "Class Song" at
THS' 1979
commencements ceremony |
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THS 1979 Yearbook |
Yearbook
Although I received
my share of rejection letters during “Writing for Publication,”
our school yearbook did publish “Class Song.” It was one of my
proudest accomplishments at that time.
Another High School
A few years after I graduated, my
brothers and I got a call from Cabrini
High School in Allen Park, Michigan to play their prom. Even though they had already chosen their
prom theme -- Styx’s “The Best of Times,” they still wanted permission to use Class Song
for their own school and graduating class. What an honor. When I
was writing the song, I was focused on getting my
Trenton classmates to vote for it by
including our school colors and team mascot right in the lyric.
Fortunately, Cabrini had the same school colors, so they didn’t
mind. |
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We played the song as
a band at the Cabrini Prom and they
credited the song in their
prom
program.
Another
Commencement, Another Yearbook
Once again, I’d be performing the
song at a graduation ceremony, this time at a
Catholic school.
I soon
found myself standing alone at the front of Cabrini's chapel, in dead
silence, with
a roomful of total
strangers staring straight at me, waiting for me to play a song I
wrote which they all chose to represent them at their graduation.
This was even more intimidating than playing the song for the first
time for my own classmates. I sweated profusely. My
voice was unsteady. My foot shivered on the damper pedal,
which squeaked every time I pressed it. But when I finally made it to
the end of the song, I was rewarded with a loud applause.
Afterward, I received a nice card and a copy of their
yearbook with Class Song
printed inside. |

Cabrini's
1981 Yearbook |
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1999 Class Song CD Publicity Photos by (cousin) Larry Caruso |
20-Year Reunion, Anniversary
Re-Issue
Way too soon, I turned around and 20
years had sped by since my high school graduation. Our vice
president, treasurer, secretary and I got together and we started
planning our (gasp) 20-year reunion. Someone suggested I sing Class
Song again and I said I would. But I started to think about how I
had never liked the way my voice sounded on the original recording.
Rather than transfer the original song to CD, I re-recorded the song
from scratch in my home studio. This time I
played most of the instruments and recorded the song with three
different lyrics: one for Trenton students, one without a vocal, so people
could sing Karaoke-style, and one without the Trenton references.
Here’s how that version goes: |
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“Friday night, feelin’ tight
The football fame, the dating game
The senior prom, the notes from Mom
The days we knew, the nights with you”
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Detroit’s 94.7 FM
WCSX radio had a program called “Class Reunion,” on which
DJ Karen Savelli
interviewed alums about their favorite high school music and then
played the songs. One of my classmates, Rose Hanlon,
suggested we send Karen a copy of the song and have her interview
me for the show, to help advertise for the reunion. I sent Karen
the song and she called me on the phone for the interview. I
decided to include the interview as a hidden track on what would be the
20th anniversary
re-issue CD. The song also got a nice
article in the local newspaper.
I thought it would be fun if I could sing it live at the reunion
with a real string section, so I hired “Equilibrium.” It was
incredible playing the song live with a string quartet backing my
piano and vocal. |

Performing with
Equilibrium at the THS 1999 Class Reunion
at
Crystal Gardens in Southgate, MI. Cello: Andy Barnhart.
Photo: Juliette LaMonica |
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Art Zasadny, (the first person I met
when I moved to Trenton and a member of our first band), and Phil
Preston, (a friend and fellow graduate), wrote beautiful, heartfelt
liner notes for the 1999 CD. I want to thank them again for
their humbling words. Also, my personal thanks to Mr. Hamilton
and to everyone in my graduating class and Cabrini's class of 1981
for making it all happen. |
Dave Caruso
May, 2008
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